Feb 27, 2008

She is the One!!!


It’s difficult to actually describe her in words.
As dedicated as a teacher and as independent as birds.
From morning to noon and noon to night
She has taken care of all our fights!!

From the day I was born to the day I will live

She has always followed the philosophy of 'give'.

Never has she desired anything other than joy

Even those...wholeheartedly were for her daughter and boy.

She has always wanted everything for the self last and least
Her all prayers were centered on protecting us from the worldly beast.

All our sorrows always evaporated and we dint know where
We even din get to know that they were deposited in her share.


We were her stars, we were her life
She even considered motherhood above 'The Wife'.

To see a smile on whose faces she worked day n night

Balancing the spectacles...even on the week eye side.

When I studied in the night, I wasn’t alone ever

There was always that hand that guiding me forever.

Happy for my success and sad when I failed

She never showed her tears to me but alone she wailed.


The woman who requires a special mention of praise

Those silent eyes, peaceful mind and loving gaze

This is to the woman I love admire n respect

Whose dedication even the almighty can’t suspect

To the world she may be just another

But to me she is the one I call MY MOTHER!!!

15 comments:

Raju said...

A nice and true effort but i beleive a change is required in first line itself.....Its not difficlut, its infact impossible to describe her in words....

Looking forward for more blogs

dipika said...

its amazing yaar.....seriously....
i mean ...i m speechless...
hamari poorvi itni acchi poet bhi hai..this poem is a tribute to all d mummys....:)
aur aunti se zyada khush koi nahi hoga is poem ko padhkar...
coz her daughter loves her so much...
aur aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiye madam..

Anjul Sahu said...

This is the one, where you'd transformed all the pixels of the Image of the M0ther into the right elements. It is really simple and fantastic.

cheers!!

arpit said...

Really Awesome...
I never knew that u r such a great poet as well...
I am also looking for other articles of urs now...

m said...

Man is the only animal that can remain on friendly terms with the victims he intends to eat until he eats them. But, this isn't true for mother as described.
The direct use of force is such a poor solution to any problem, it is generally employed only by small children and large nations. Therefore for youth poetry is the best way for appreciation.
Good luck and Keep rocking
Z

vivek said...

I have just one thing to say for this...
"INCREDIBLE"

Akshat Saxena said...

Poorvi its a masterpiece.I dont remember anybody describing mother in a such beautiful manner. Gud carry on

saurabh said...

hey thats cute...that is really well written...so u r maturing at writing skills..gr88..
keep the good wrk goin..:)

pooja said...

abhi tak bahut poems padhi.some are beautifully expressing feelings,some are having good vocab.BUT RELLY this poem is combination of everything.

sabse badi baat ha ki har child is poem ko khud se jod pa raha ha.looking his/her mother in this poem.really poorvi,excellent poem.all of us are having this feeling.but very few can express this in this excellent way

susmita said...

truely awesome..adjectives fall simply short to describe ur writing skills rather ur talent..keep writing :)

ira said...

hey..really nicely written..keep it up

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Keshav Kekre said...

amazing.........i loved it.....keep coming with such wonderful pieces.

kshitij said...

very well written...i always knew ur a good writer but after reading this poem a new facet of our topper miss MS has come infront of me....
Excellent Work...
keep it up.....

greva said...

wonderful job.. simply great!!